Type B:

- L2-3: ref/explain for first sentence
- L7-8: ref/explain for sentence on Dirac mass model
- L52: "Because of ..." -> explain
- L234-238: 1) "medium working point" -> this is slang, not needed, also since it is explained in the last sentence; you could simply rephrase "the identification is performed with the CSVv2 algorithm [ref]".
  2) CSVv2 relies on many more properties; suggest: "This algorithms relies on many discriminating variables, such as ..."
  3) Values for efficiency and misidentification probability of 63 and 1% are true for *pt > 30 GeV* (but actually the performance decreases very significantly at higher pt)

Type A:

- general: maybe avoid splitting equations over lines (use "~")
- L11: "N" is never defined explicitely
- L70-73: is 8TeV analysis more recent than 13TeV?
- L137-138: use \texttt or \textit for names of PDF sets
- Ref 8: SU, not su (capital)