line 43: isolated pions -> isolated charged pions
line 52: The relative scale ....   I do not understand this sentence. Are you stating that test beam data is used to transfer
scale of electron initiated showers to that for hadrons ?
line 176: "a different method is used " .    different to what ?
line 180: Explain pulse shape templates . Why 3 templates ?
line 198" "energy deficit"  .... deficit from what ?
line 265: The paragraph has been discussing MB data . Whay suddenly a statement about cosmic rays ?
line 282: Can you compare the "method of moments" to iterative method and motivate its introduction? Are the mothods independent ?
line 492: "the electromagnetic fraction ... "  Is this referring to the long-short fibre difference ?