L39: confusing to mention cross section not used -> remove the number
L138: mention explicitly which tagger is used (I guess DeepCSV). Also, would be good to mention mis-id from c-jets
L206-209: remove "Top tagging ... yields."
L275-276: description of JES misleading -> improve
Section7: strange to introduce fit in "Results" section. Either rename the section (e.g. "Signal extraction and results") or describe fit earlier (e.g. Section 4)
L341: mention priors
L361: remove value of Ref[29]