Mandy:

  asmz not \asmz

Zhiqing:

1) There are a few figures which miss the “H1 and ZEUS” label, e.g. Fig. 4.

 -- I put in labels via tex (for the moment)

2) L32: order(NNLO) -> order (NNLO)

 -- done
 
3) L47-48: both the cross section … and the inclusive data.
   I would suggest to exchange the order as: both the inclusive data
   and the cross section …

 -- done

4) Section 3 title: QCD Analysis -> QCD analysis
   [to be consistent with the style of the other (sub)sections]

 -- done

5) L164: Eqs. 2–6 -> Eqs. (2)—(6)
   [to be consistent with the style of Eq. (7) at L246]

 -- done

6) For the citation of (sub)figures, we have currently three different styles:
   e.g. Figs. 1 b) and d) at L189;
   Fig. 9 and Fig. 10 at L331;
   and Fig. 10 b) and 10 c) at L332.
   I would suggest to use the same style, e.g. Figs. 1 b) and 1 d);
   Figs. 9 and 10; and Figs. 10 b) and 10 c).

 -- done 

7) L251: Eq. ( 7) -> Eq. (7)

  -- done

8) L260: d.o.f. undefined

  -- done   However, I don't think that d.o.f. has to be defined

9) L299: asmz -> \asmz

  -- done 

10) L371: -0.0030 -> $-0.0030$

  -- done

11) L384: on of the -> one of the

  -- done

12) Table 1, titles in the first row:
    I would change the first letter to capital, e.g. taken to Taken, etc

  -- I leave that one for the reading to decide.

     It's:  "Data Set taken"  [ I will decapitaize Set]