paper draft HIN-18-018
CWR comments by David Walter

Type B:
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Abstract:
l2: "... is sensitive to the charge" color charge or electric charge?
l8: proposed -> performed
l11/12: "... comparing PbPb and pp data as a function of collision centrality." 
	compared is pp data with PbPb data in different collision centrality regions

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5. Jet charge measurement
l146: If I remember correctly, ak4 jets have no fixed cone size, to be precise I would drop the "... that are located within the jet cone ..." 		and write something like: "... that have a relative angular distance from the jet axis of \Delta r =..."

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7. Template fitting
l199: "... added in quadrature ..." treated as uncorrelated ?
l028: "... PbPb data than PYTHIA ... " -> "... PbPb data than it is modeled in PYTHIA ..."?

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8. Systematic uncertainties
l222: "added in quadrature" -> treated as uncorrelated ?

Type A:
l24: width -> variance
l25: "... on both[,] jet energy and [jet] size[,] can ..."
l97: "... requiring a jet to be present in an event[,] biases the data sample ..."
l153: "... to both[,] hard and soft ..."
l224: "The difference in [the] tracking ..."
      "... positive and negative [charged] particles ..."
l233: "... positive and negative [charged] ..."
l293: unprecise: " to be relatively flat " -> better, something like: "with no significant deviation from one"